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with the only apathy I could feign.

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  You and I:

     makeshift souls of birdsong,
     because we’d only word-etched ribs
     and hearts incompatible with stillness.

     We’d breathe trust in parallel irises,
     just to see hope fall before ruin;
     darkness was learned better swords than opponents,
     and they stabbed as swift as sure.


    I and You:

     regretting in weeping,
     for love never learned to be held—
     for souls always seemed to be cracked
     by each stretching tongue of longing.

     Perhaps love is lost before it is found,
     and perhaps love stays lost to hearts
     gifted without the affinity for light;

     we were matches made in heaven,
     of hell’s most cruelest design…

     You and I, and I and you,
     forever longing to be whole.

I don't really know what to say about this one. Perhaps everything has been said. (or perhaps it's just my mad ramblings from the flu.)
Please let me know of any weak spots... it was more a contemplation piece, so I did not look for them.

Critique and feedback are most appreciated, as always!

(p.s. Sorry for not replying and for only writing poetry... I've the stomach flu. It is horrible, but I'm on the third day; since this is so, I believe it is feeling better. I'm skipping again tomorrow, but then it is back to school for me :surrender:... and I now feel for any of you who've fell ill with this blasted flu.)
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camelopardalisinblue's avatar
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous.