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My heart is at home
in breezy points,
for it knows not warmth
to be comfortably smothered.
but my soul feels most safe
when hidden away,
for it fears the commitment
of being committed.
and what of me?
I feel most safe
inside phantoms of darkness,
where one cannnot know my craving…
for I crave the destructing
presence of company…
always aching, itching,
burning.
For all that I am and all that I know.
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Something inspired me. This inspiration is fleeting nowadays, so I tried to snatch it up. Your thoughts would be much appreciated... especially if they pertain to the ending: I find myself unsure. (Hopefully I'm still mixing up my style)
Critique/feedback is most appreciated! 
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Something inspired me. This inspiration is fleeting nowadays, so I tried to snatch it up. Your thoughts would be much appreciated... especially if they pertain to the ending: I find myself unsure. (Hopefully I'm still mixing up my style)
Critique/feedback is most appreciated! © 2013 - 2024 Nullibicity
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Hmm. This has a sing song meter to it, which makes it into a corrupted lullaby. I like that definition of it, for it lacks the imagery of your usual style and instead seems to calmly ponder depression. It's very interesting. Nice variation!