literature

Trying to Silence the Thunder

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Published: Oct 30, 2011

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Literature Text

My heart,
Beating so enthusiastically
While it decays so horribly inside;
It rots,
The stench penetrating the thick air,
Filled with scarlet gushes.

Stop.
No,
Stop!
Please…

There is no escape;
My heart thunders on.

Your thoughts?? Don't feel like you have to, I am just looking for opinions on this. Hopefully it's okay!

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SoundlessWhispers

Dec 25, 2011

Hopefully?! Hopefully!? You're kidding, right?
This is amazing! Albiet, a little different, but amazing all the same!
Another fantastic piece.