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The Juncture of Skin and Bone

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Ripples of rib, moving smoothly over hills of bone,
an expansion of skin dipped and concave. such
irregular habits give way to soft sinking
skin, mountainous ridges piercing through malnourished flesh like
enamel slowly leaking out bone; traitorous and seemingly backwards.

Always shrinking—hunching inwards due in part to
will and the structured stretch of spine.
and what simple thought ever plagued the soul, until
ridicule spilled from pore and pore,
enabled and assiduous.
now plastic measuring tapes
entrap bare imperfect waists, pulling tighter, tighter, and tighter
still. stripping the skin clear with gut wrenching heaves,
spilling acidic bile over sterile porcelain floors.

and it's never enough.

I decided to write a poem about bulimia-anorexia. It's a concept that has been prodding at my mind for days. I wanted to do it with an acrostic, too, and chose the term "raise awareness". It's a rather solemn piece, but I am quite proud of it.

As always, feedback is appreciated.
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My inspiration would be here, but warnings are advised. This was a picture set to be involved in a magazine. She is indeed anorexic, and so I don't wish any of you to click on it and to be disturbed. You have been warned. click

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v3n0m607's avatar
O.O this... was ....Awesome! I love all the comparisons between the body and mountains and things like that :) you were always the best at making an entire poem out of a phrase and could actually make it make sense. This one makes me want to get back into writing but I don't have much inspiration so it is difficult :/