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They star-gazed in his brain
(taking telescopes to lynching sanity)
to see just how he breathed…
how curtained eyes with lion’s mane
concealed inhaling pleas,
which carefully fell
from the shelter of paradox lips
and the crevices of chapped lies…
how tombstones bled into his teeth—
and heartbreak on his tongue—
and how under the belly of manta ray skies,
he laid to rest the dreams
he once did dare to dream.
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Was It All A Lie?
The funny thing is,
You can walk past me
And totally ignore me
Acting like I don't exist
Without an inch of guilt in your black heart
After all the things we have been through
After all the times we have been there for each other
And you act like it never happened
The funny thing is,
You can look in the mirror
Thinking you're the best
Thinking you are too good for everyone
After all the things I have done for you
After all the things we have put each other through
Through thick and thin
And totally forget that I was once in your life
That you needed me
That you loved me
It's like you're a totally different per
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Nightmares
I don't want to fall asleep
I can't bare to close my eyes
I can't stand what's inside my head
Be it made of truth or lies
'Cause when I fall asleep
The nightmares take place
The worst things I can imagine
Scarier than any screaming face
In my dreams
I see you there
But you're hurting me on purpose
And you don't seem to care
I see you with other girls
And you look so happy
And I'm stood there screaming
Telling you it should be me
But you're not listening
You're too busy having fun
I can't get away from what I'm seeing
No matter how much I try to run
I'm seeing you with girlfriends
I've never even heard of
Telling them the
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Constellation
She is dream dust,
too bitter or wise
for her own good.
A timeless dragon's soul
somewhere inside a
scaled shell, burning
the silence in her bones
alive, honeysuckle sweet.
She collects fireflies only to
set them free at 3am,
crying to an uncaring moon.
& she's begging for the stars
to take her away,
make this house a home
rigged in the sky.
To me,
She is already naked fever
swimming through the cosmos
& I orbit her.
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Here is one I wrote during my lengthy break. I'm still not too sure about it... while I think there may be many mistakes in this piece, I think that there are still a few good things present. (:
Your thoughts, of course, are deeply appreciated!
Thank you for your time!
( I couldn't come up with a title again. I'm working on it, but if you have any suggestions or overall critique, please feel free to share! )
NaPoWriMo submission #1
Title suggested by: ~MozartsNemesis
Your thoughts, of course, are deeply appreciated!
Thank you for your time!
( I couldn't come up with a title again. I'm working on it, but if you have any suggestions or overall critique, please feel free to share! )
NaPoWriMo submission #1
Title suggested by: ~MozartsNemesis
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I like this one as well. im sorry im spamming you with faves, and comments, but you are insanely talented. The only part in here I didn't love was the sentence in parentheses. I like the concept, I just feel like the words could be better. Also, the ending..repeating the word dream(s) at the end of the last two lines kinda feels like a copout. However,
"from the shelter of paradox lips
and the crevices of chapped lies…"
-lovely. as far as a title goes.. I would suggest Supernova Wake. (wake as in funeral.)
"from the shelter of paradox lips
and the crevices of chapped lies…"
-lovely. as far as a title goes.. I would suggest Supernova Wake. (wake as in funeral.)