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Hold my hand.
Please,
Never let go.
Let me feel the warmth of another,
Let it transfer into my frozen soul.
Thaw it,
But please don't break it.
It's fragile now
More than ever.
So despite these eyes
Boring holes into our backs,
Please just put your hand in mine;
I'll hold it tightly,
And try to put all of my love
Into that action.
If only you were able to feel
All these emotions I have for you.

But I'll keep them to myself.

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Well the thoughtfulness was sure short-lived; I slipped back into a really quick poem that I finished in under a minute. Bad Nulli :slap:!

Also hopefully it isn't too boring... hey you! Yes you yawning in the back! Shut that mouth..... T-T Sooo Hopefully you guys are still awake

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For the HTC (I'm slowly making sure it gets done!).

Theme: Hold My Hand
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~SoundlessWhispers Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Girl...what the heck are you talking about?!
Of course this is amazing! It is anything BUT boring!

I really liked the emotion and the wording really added to the hesitant mood.
Bravo! definitely faving! :heart:
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~Nullibicity Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I always appreciate your input. I'm also happy to hear you aren't snoring away in your chair :D
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~SoundlessWhispers Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol.
Well you are most welcome! x3
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~v3n0m607 Aug 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This is definitely not boring ;) I can really relate to this, or maybe I should say I will be able to relate to this someday. PLus if you read it the right way its something that everyone goes through one day or another. Very nice :)
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~Nullibicity Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm very happy to hear you liked it! :D
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~v3n0m607 Aug 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Welcome :)
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~13xBleedingLovex13 Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol *shuts mouth* lol jk.. not boring lol :D

Great poem, even for a quicky :)
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~Nullibicity Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:O ... lol

Thanks!
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