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Her love was bone white,
 unblemished and
 stunning


[  but never like diamonds.  ]


 Truth then became water to
 pruning fingers and splitting lips,
 while she drowned
 in the mouth
 of a liar like me.

I feel like I've been writing crappy poems recently. That, and right now I feel like a corrupting influence.
(I apologize for spamming you all.)

title suggested by the wonderful ~Choque-Plumbeo
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shep4life Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is truly stunning
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awww :C

but :heart: that first line really pulled me in.
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad it could pull you in, then. Sometimes I forget I've even written such pieces: This one is so short! However, I'm still glad it could offer some enjoyment.
Thank you! :love:
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :huggle:
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minninnewah Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"while she drowned
in the mouth
of a liar like me."

Gaah, so dark, so powerful!
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Again, you've found my favorite part to write. You have a talented eye, I think! I mostly say this, because that was the line that I put the most emotion into.

Your comment was so lovely to read. Thank you for such kind words!! :heart:
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minninnewah Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think the talent is in your writing, so that my eye is able to recognize it! :)
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :blushes: You are far too kind.
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is stunning, and I love the title you ended up with.
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy you liked it! The title was ~Choque-Plumbeo's wonderful idea, and I think it is wonderful as well :D

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! (and I again: I apologize that I'm only responding now)
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