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Madness slipped inside of me like a hand beneath my blouse—thieving and too truthful—while i find myself in fetals, wondering where Autumn went… crushed beneath someone’s shoes, as i feel crushed beneath these memories?

i’m nobody’s treasure (just a no one in a body), and though this mouth is paralyzed, i scream these words ten fingers, to grasp at everything i’ve lost. But what’s the point? i rise from moondust graves when the sun peaks my head in halos; and i hope, and i pray, that this day is one of life… but every time, i am sent to death in stars and in the shadows of the dark. And i fear i’ll only be disasters, thrown down the stairs ahead of life, while i try to learn to fall in ways that will not break my neck, my arm—my spirit…

but every ‘wild’ needs a ‘broken,’ and i’m afraid He’s beat you to it; mankind just likes it broken.

sometimes i feel like he broke me. and i hate that i let him.

sorry for this pity piece. i think i'm over this... it's just the times that i feel dirty... the times that i feel broken. and sometimes, i think i just blame him, because the only other option is myself.

please just ignore this. i'm tired of being a broken record, when i know everyone is going through far worse. i'll be better in no time! rest assured.

 

(i'm also tired of explaining: i feel i do not have the right. So i shall continue to hide behind these words--a coward:  fav.me/d60tsgn)

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lunar-glow Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
It's amazing how easily you can portray what you want to say with such eloquence and simplicity at the same time. The emotion definitely shows in your words, and yet it doesn't drown them out or create an overpowering, rambling mass of sorrow or depression. It's wonderful.
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

Thank you so very, very much! Your description of my writing was just so beautiful and so touching. To have someone think that of my work just makes me smile and feel good! Thank you. You are very, very kind! :heart:

I hope I continue to write things worthy of such description, and also worthy of your wonder. :tighthug:

(If you ever see anything I can improve upon, please don't hesitate to let me know! I'm always trying to grow where I can [: )

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lunar-glow Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
Only excellent writing would earn such a description; try not to be surprised if I leave more messages like that. You are so sweet and actually sincere, unlike so many, and you've got a beautiful talent. I can sometimes write poetry. It tends to come easily, but only at random occasions does it actually turn out to be of any value.

So thank YOU, for your excellent work and your kind words. They mean the world to me.
Have a beautiful day! And keep writing! :love: 

I'll be sure to tell you if there is anything to be improved upon. Though I'm in no ways an expert; my main writing talent is in writing stories and scripts.
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Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Writer
So amazing Nullibicity the poetry that is, how you make it breathe the emotions you are letting us see, effortlessly.

You must get better :D because nothing is worse then feeling broken
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

I've had this comment in my inbox for a while, and I apologize about not replying. I'll be honest in saying this left me speechless. You always give such lovely, uplifting words. I thank you! That, and I always enjoy hearing your opinion when you have the time to leave it.

 

Thank you! You're always such a bright and caring soul :rose:

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Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Writer
My apologies for not replying sooner :)

You're welcome Nullibicity :) i hope to see more artwork from you soon :) have fun my dear
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YunaTrebel Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. I wish that my journals were half as beautiful as this is. <3
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Thank you, my dear. You are very kind...and in a painful way, I'm glad this could at least be beautiful: I think beauty makes the pain easier to look upon, yes? :tighthug: So thank you so very much for giving me your perspective. I really, deeply appreciate it :rose:

Best wishes, lovely! Have a fantastic day!!

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YunaTrebel Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am sorry you are in pain. I can be insensitive without knowing. I'm sorry if I hurt you in anyway. :/
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Stop that thought right there! :giggle:

You are a sweetheart, and you in no way offended or hurt me. There was a part of me hurt to begin with, and sometimes I write with that part. So I apologize for not turning her off when replying--I usually do. So here, the fault lies with me. I apologize! You truly are an amazingly caring person, and I thank you so very much for taking the time that you have to write me such lovely words. Thank you with all my heart. It's because of people like you that I feel able to keep writing :tighthug::heart:

 

Keep smiling and may happiness come your way. If it doesn't... well, I'm here should you ever need a pair of ears :huggle:

Have a great day, dearheart. You deserve it :rose:

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