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Ashes! Ashes! We All Fall Down.

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You wake me; I’m all scarlets and steady streams of autumn.
They fall into the porcelain far easier than you’d think,
and just sit there, a one-by-one subtraction.
(god, I was never good with math.)

There’re monsters beneath your feet, and their frustration
huffs and puffs from the wood like chimneys,
rib walls trembling with the urge to worship either.

Sometimes, when the night is harsh in velvet,
I watch you set them on your alters, and violence
becomes a color dark enough it covers dreams:

skin the shape of an apple-pie crust, mind the canyon of a meteor;
you had enough to water impact zones, but I never grew
deep enough to weather away ‘rotten.’

I smile at you, like I know what I’m doing,
and slowly pull myself undone.

I told you an experimental piece was coming! Leave it to me to stay up far too late due to tomorrow's events, and then write a bunch of nonsense, to which I am leaning more towards "fond of." I have no idea if it's warranted, in this case. Sorry if it's a bit too repetitive of a theme in my gallery right now. I'm not sure entirely what's bringing it to mind, but I won't turn down material to spew my thoughts over.

Critique is highly appreciated and welcomed! :blowkiss: I know I still have so far to go as a writer.

Thank you all, as always! I love you and hope you are well :heart:
© 2014 - 2024 Nullibicity
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lunar-glow's avatar
There're a lot of really great visuals in this. I got kind of lost in them the first time through and had to reread it to begin to comprehend what they meant, but I love the word choice and symbols.