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A Poet's Romance

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June 21, 2013
A Poet's Romance by ~Nullibicity Suggester writes: Poetry is often a contradiction: a solitary, intensely personal experience we choose to share with the world.
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She was the quiet sort,
tsunamis tucked
within her eyes,
anxieties pinned
to pottery skin;

she would mold herself
into moonlight butterflies
and glist'ning calla lilies,

pure and white and
beautiful.

and when night cast
itself upon her in
heated, hard'ning flames,

she’d smash herself
upon the rocks
and in morning start
again.

.
I would fill her with poetry,
breathe it in her skin; she is the perfect metaphor,
so beautifully whole and wrecked.


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I sort of was infatuated with a poet finding someone whom he wanted to write words upon—thrust his passion upon.
Your thoughts would be much appreciated (and any critique you may have: I'm still learning!) :blowkiss:

EDIT: :faint: HOLY CRAP A DD! thank you a million times over!
I just want to express my overwhelming gratitude. I'm really just blown away that people would think it good enough for such an award. All the comments, favorites, and watches are extremely appreciated. This just means the world to me. :heart:
Also thanks a bunch to `HaveTales-WillTell for the suggestion and ^Beccalicious for the feature!

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A-Rose-By-Any-Name's avatar
It's an amazing poem! I love the gentle but powerful emotion it brings. It is an amazing expression of love. 10/10

Honestly, from one poet to another. This is the kind of poem you should take to a slam or a contest. With something like this, you would give your competition a run for there money.