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January 21, 2013
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She was the quiet sort,
tsunamis tucked
within her eyes,
anxieties pinned
to pottery skin;

she would mold herself
into moonlight butterflies
and glist'ning calla lilies,

pure and white and

and when night cast
itself upon her in
heated, hard'ning flames,

she’d smash herself
upon the rocks
and in morning start

I would fill her with poetry,
breathe it in her skin; she is the perfect metaphor,
so beautifully whole and wrecked.


I sort of was infatuated with a poet finding someone whom he wanted to write words upon—thrust his passion upon.
Your thoughts would be much appreciated (and any critique you may have: I'm still learning!) :blowkiss:

EDIT: :faint: HOLY CRAP A DD! thank you a million times over!
I just want to express my overwhelming gratitude. I'm really just blown away that people would think it good enough for such an award. All the comments, favorites, and watches are extremely appreciated. This just means the world to me. :heart:
Also thanks a bunch to `HaveTales-WillTell for the suggestion and ^Beccalicious for the feature!

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MagTehPapillon's artistic use/interpretation.
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Given 2013-06-21
A Poet's Romance by ~Nullibicity Suggester writes: Poetry is often a contradiction: a solitary, intensely personal experience we choose to share with the world. ( Suggested by HaveTales-WillTell and Featured by Beccalicious )
19andMugsy Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very well written poetry
lunar-glow Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
It's so beautiful. It flows so well and the imagery is wonderful.
Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

:heart: you always have such amazing words to give to my own. I am very grateful.


lunar-glow Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
Well thank you. And you're welcome.
astrangeallure Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Truly very visual...I'm such a wonderful way. :heart:
Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

Thank you so very much! I, myself, am stunned by your beautiful comment. :tighthug::heart:

Have a fantastic day! :rose:

astrangeallure Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: heart: :heart:
TehSweetheart Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Whoahh, this is really beautiful! You have a great way with words! And congrats on the DD. This definitely deserves it.
Nullibicity Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

:stare: you're just too nice! Wah!

Thank you so very, very much. I am grateful and honored by your words :iconbowplz:

You're such a flipping sweetheart! (I suppose your username is right on the money, then :giggle:)


Thank you, again. Really. It means a lot!

TehSweetheart Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
N'aww, there's no such thing as "too nice" (;

I don't know why you feel so honoured by my words, but I'm flattered! ^////^

Yuup, so they say, hahaha (;

Aaaaand, nahh, thank YOU ^^ You're equally as lovely and sweet as me (:
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