She was the quiet sort,
tsunamis tucked
within her eyes,
anxieties pinned
to pottery skin;
she would mold herself
into moonlight butterflies
and glist'ning calla lilies,
pure and white and
beautiful.
and when night cast
itself upon her in
heated, hard'ning flames,
she’d smash herself
upon the rocks
and in morning start
again.















As I said before, your imagery... Seriously, my eyes are GLUED to the screen here: I've got goosebumps, and I'm not joking!!!
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Thank you so much for leaving a comment: it is much appreciated
I honestly had not seen this poem as that complex until I read your words... then I realized there might actually be more to it then I thought. The story and reasons behind my writing it were indeed complex... but I am always unsure if the complexity is transferred into the actual poem. My worries are eased, though, and I'm excited to have discovered new things about this piece!
Thank you, again. Your feedback is warmly appreciated