Think not of decay when reapers lay claim,
Nor of sharp loss in following mourning;
On that day let hushed pleasantries acclaim.
And kiss the life from dulled eyes, unseeing.
Find not thy feet above flower-laid stones:
‘Neath earthly linen I shan’t rouse for thee.
So whether memories make new or old:
Beloved love, remember me fondly.
Sell thy sorrows to swift merchanting winds,
Be stolen by thy existence and time.
Overlook me for sanity’s defense,
But discard me not to the undefined.
My life doth re-begin through memory,
So my beloved love: remember me.








xxx
AND IT ISN'T ROUGH ANYWHERE!!!!
No one has ever thanked me for writing before
Thank you! You make my spirit lift so far! Although, I did botch the iambic pentameter as I usually do with my sonnets. Though... I like this one far too much to revise it.
Thanks for such nice words! They made me smile (:
I didn't even notice any discrepancies with the iambic pentameter. This was seriously amazing; it is pasted onto my wall in pride of place as we speak. XD
I'm so glad to hear you find my comments as helpful and uplifting as I find your poems!! And thank you so much for always taking the time to reply to me.
Oh goodness. Every time you mention "the wall" I do, like, the most embarrassing, internal happy dance
You are most welcome! I quite love you dearly
Hee hee, glad to hear it!! XD It's this one wall of my bedroom, and it's like totally covered in your amazing poetry - I'm running out of space!! It's really fantastic, because the first thing I see when I wake up in the morning is one of your awesome poems, and it really motivates me and lets me start my day with a spring in my step. Plus, whenever my friends come over we nearly always end up having like a huge in-depth discussion about one of your pieces, just because they're up there on the wall. XD
Thank you, also, for the watch: I hope to not disappoint you in the future.